Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, December 19, 2019
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia Ora Frankie, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteWow, you’ve chosen some amazing super powers. Invisibility would be so cool. If I was invisible I think I would drive somewhere. It would be so funny because it would look like the car was driving with magic. How crazy would that be!
Flying would also be awesome. Imagine being able to soar with the birds. If you flew high enough, you could even get in a fast jetstream and travel around the world super quickly. It’d be a real time saver. What country would you travel to first?
Telekinesis would be amazing too. Calling things with your mind or being able to manipulate objects could solve so many problems. What’s the first thing you would do with this power?
It would be really awesome if you could include pictures or colours into your post to really engage your readers. Perhaps you could look at these <a href="https://sites.google.com/manaiakalani.org/manaiakalani-cybersmart/being-cybersmart/smart-learners/digital-learning-
Happy blogging,
Shannon
Hi Frankie this is Holly I liked the way you added a lot of detail in to your story.This reminds me of my first day of touch rugby.
ReplyDeleteNext time you could add photos into the story.
thank you Holly I will try to get to that nga mihi
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