Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 17, 2020
COVID-19
8 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Well done Frankie, this is definitely something many people need to look at and make sure they are all following. Yes I agree it is very annoying, but I also think the best thing is to stay in our bubbles and keep ourselves healthy and well. I like how you have written a description and asked a question of your audience. Remember to continue using our Think 6 posting guidelines and to proofread what you've typed. :)
ReplyDeletehi Frankie, good to see you are writing some Covid-19 facts for others to read. I didn't realise 70% of our products are NZ made, that's a relief. Where did you find that statistic? My hands are so dry from all the washing. Better to be safe than sorry though. Always edit your description before you publish. I hope to see more from you soon.
ReplyDeletei found out that fact on tv!
DeleteHi Frankie
ReplyDeleteGreat post. It is hard to tell what is fact and what is just stuff made up about Covid-19, but you have some good information here. As the teachers above have written, your post would be much more powerful if you added punctuation Frankie. You have interesting things to say Frankie! Keep blogging! Mrs Pascoe
Hi Frankie, I really like the way you personalised your writing on Covid19. It is so lovely to hear your thoughts and concern, thankyou!
ReplyDeletethank you everyone!
ReplyDeletethat is great work frankie it is your friend i like that you talked about that good work form Ryder
ReplyDeletethanks
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