Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, September 11, 2020
our insane WW2 animation!
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Hi my name is Layla from Ahipara school.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when the plans crash it is so funny.Did you think about putting sharks in the water and the man can fall in the sharks mouth. I like how you animated the slides it made me really interested.
HI my name is Lochlan Ahipara school I enjoyed the part when the planes crashed. Did you think about the blood? Why did you not do words?
ReplyDeletehi my name is Ashlyn and I am from Ahipara school. My favourite part is when the planes crashed and it fell down the ground. Did you think about making it self flip so you don´t have to press the bottom 174 times? Next time, you could try add some speech bubbles and make them talk. Great blog post!
ReplyDeleteHey Ashlyn!, thanks for the comment on 116 and 117 there are speech marks and I will look into making it automated!
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